Thursday, August 11, 2016


This dismal cry rings sadly in her ear,

Through which it enters to surprise her heart;



Venus and Adonis           Lines 889-890    



Right off the bat we’re starting with something that’s pretty obscure. Let’s do a little homework. Shakespeare wrote about thirty-seven plays (depends on who you ask; there are only 36 in the First Folio but more about that at a later date), 154 sonnets, and a handful of other poems. Venus and Adonis is one of the latter. It’s been a while since I read this poem in its entirety (to be clear, while I have read this one, there is a lot more of Shakespeare that I haven’t read than there is that I have read) and I really don’t remember much of it. So I started looking into Venus and Adonis and I ended up reading all 1,200 lines of it today. And there’s some pretty steamy stuff in there. But you’d have to read it pretty carefully to pick up on it. It’s about Venus trying to seduce (unsuccessfully) Adonis and about how the next day Adonis is killed by a boar while hunting and Venus turning him into a flower. It’s based on a section of The Metamorphoses of Ovid (which, believe it or not, I have read), which in turn is based on the Greek mythologies. Today’s random lines are about Venus hearing the hunt and (rightly) fearing for Adonis’s life. Interesting, but what to make of it?

Well, for starters, this is not a well-known work (at least by your average, non-shakespearean American), let alone a well-known line. I’m not sure if there are any particular lines in Venus and Adonis which qualify as well known. Of course, the chances of coming up, by random selection of the total works of Shakespeare, with a well-known line are pretty slim. Or should we say, extremely miniscule. But whether or not it’s a well-known line, you know it now. And is it worth knowing? “This dismal cry rings sadly in her ear, / Through which it enters to surprise her heart;” It’s actually two lines, but I’ve decided to go to the end of the sentence or thought with the lines I end up with. And what the heck, it’s a good line. Nice imagery. Easily understandable (and believe me were not gonna have that every day). So maybe we should just leave it at that.  

Okay then. You’ve got your daily dose. A bit of a slow start, but it’s only day one. Let’s just let this one go and we’ll see how tomorrow goes. Let’s hear it one last time for good effect. Read it out loud and see if you can enjoy the language!

This dismal cry rings sadly in her ear, through which it enters to surprise her heart.

Yeah, that’s Shakespeare.

2 comments:

Mrs Blue said...

You think this line is easy? I think it's a little sorted. Why does it surprise her heart? Seems like it should sadden her heart or pierce it.

Pete Blagys said...

I think you'll be seeing lines that are a lot more 'sorted' (what does that even mean?) than this line, and then maybe this one might seem easy in comparison.

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