Tuesday, April 18, 2023

 

Today’s Totally Random Line(s)

           

The business she hath broached in the state

Cannot endure my absence.

 

 -Antony

 Antony and Cleopatra                   Act I, Scene ii, Line 178

                     

Antony is talking to Enobarbus. They’ve just received news that Antony’s wife, Fulvia, has died, so Antony needs to go to Rome. Fulvia is the she is in today’s line. Enobarbus tells Antony that he need not grieve because there are other women that can take her place. It seems like an odd thing to say. Check it out

If there were no more women but Fulvia, then had you indeed a cut, and the case to be lamented: this grief is crown’d with consolation; your old smock brings forth a new petticoat:- and, indeed, the tears live in an onion that should water this sorrow. The tears live in an onion! What the heck do you think of that line? And this whole bit about no need to cry over Fulvia? It seems a bit hard-hearted. But then again, Enobarbus is a crusty old soldier. Eh?

It’s also a little bit interesting that in this scene Antony’s lines are written in verse and Enobarbus’s in prose; I guess to accentuate the old soldier's lack of etiquette.

A lot of times people (myself included) wonder about the apparent inconsistency of Will’s use of verse. Much of his writing is iambic pentameter, but there’s plenty of prose sprinkled in there too. Well, in this scene we have both, and apparently for pretty good reason.

Anyway, that would be an interesting thing to say to someone who’s crying over something that you don’t feel is worth crying over. The tears live in an onion that should water this sorrow. If they were really upset about something and you said this, well, I’m not sure that would go over very well.


Perfect example!
Here's the birthday girl, aka Cakey McCakeface. Now, if the frosting on that cake turned out to be anything other than buttercream frosting, Cakey would be extremely upset, possibly to the point of tears. And if it came to tears, wouldn't I be justified in saying the tears live in an onion that should water this sorrow. I'd be taking my life in my hands, but just the same, I'd probably be justified. 

1 comment:

Squeaks said...

Woof. This guy shouldn't be writing any Hallmark sympathy cards.

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